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Sunday, October 7, 2012

AND he gave up


This post has been published by me as a part of the Blog-a-Ton 32; the thirty-second edition of the online marathon of Bloggers; where we decide and we write. To be part of the next edition, visit and start following Blog-a-Ton. The theme for the month is 'An Untold Story'



The irregular green lines on the monitor grew fierce, wires that extended to his chest, hid the tender heart battling for blood. He raised his left arm though the oxygen mask could not hide his smile.  His eyes expressed the desire to speak.
BUT
The last war ceased, and it was lost, An Untold Story.


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31 comments:

  1. SG07 October, 2012 18:45

    Untold sorrow for his family.

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  2. Megha08 October, 2012 11:47

    The untold story..was never told.., may be that is why it why it was called untold. Your story was short but it just made me realize that..with a person's demise there is always an untold story!
    All the Best for BAT 32 :)

    Regards,
    Megha

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    1. M'Bai Madrasi14 October, 2012 23:43

      yes, and i wanted this to remain very short, for then there's the incompleteness in it

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  3. R. Ramesh08 October, 2012 21:00

    baapre high voltage boss

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  4. KParthasarathi09 October, 2012 05:52

    with such brevity your brought to maximum effect the spirit of the title

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  5. Rinaya09 October, 2012 21:22

    The sadness...of having a story and the desire to share it...but not being able to express it...aptly penned..ATB for BAT

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    1. M'Bai Madrasi10 October, 2012 20:27

      YOu guessed it perfect Rinaya :)
      same to u :D

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  6. Deepa Duraisamy10 October, 2012 17:58

    Haven't seen that good a 55 fiction before! Best wishes for BAT!

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    1. M'Bai Madrasi10 October, 2012 20:21

      Thank you Deepa :) same to u .. wishes for BAT

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  7. Unknown11 October, 2012 02:22

    Really a good concept you have incorporated. Nicely written :-)

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  8. Tomz11 October, 2012 22:58

    This is ur first attempt for 55 fiction rite? well needless to say, u r a success..

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  9. ARJUN MS12 October, 2012 22:56

    Excellent one!!!!

    Do visit mine http://www.stylisharjun.blogspot.in/2012/10/an-untold-story.html

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  10. Karan Shah13 October, 2012 14:38

    so much to say...but ran out of time to do so
    ATB for BAT :)

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    1. M'Bai Madrasi14 October, 2012 19:24

      Thanks Karan. Indeed time doesnt always permit our wishes
      Same to you

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  11. Apala Sengupta14 October, 2012 18:27

    good attempt to a 55er! good luck! :)

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  12. aativas14 October, 2012 21:14

    Brief and effective story!

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  13. M'Bai Madrasi14 October, 2012 23:40

    Thanks aativas :)

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  14. M'Bai Madrasi14 October, 2012 23:49

    Thanks Nivi :D After long time,you are on ma blog.:)

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  15. Jayashree Srivatsan15 October, 2012 12:18

    That was excellent . With every death die many untold stories !

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  16. Rohan Kachalia16 October, 2012 12:50

    Perfectly brought out the sorrow in 55 words. Loved it!! ATB for BAT! Now following you :)

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  17. Kshitij KK Khurana17 October, 2012 09:36

    Short and full of impact. Very easy to relate to.

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  18. Someone is Special18 October, 2012 17:24

    so much said in 55 words.. Loved it :)

    Someone is Special

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  19. R. Ramesh22 October, 2012 22:29

    hi friend eppadi irrukingo? best wishes

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  20. Bikram12 November, 2012 17:02

    Thats why i believe to say what is in the heart always .. lest we run out of time to say them




    Bikram's

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