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Sunday, October 7, 2012

AND he gave up


This post has been published by me as a part of the Blog-a-Ton 32; the thirty-second edition of the online marathon of Bloggers; where we decide and we write. To be part of the next edition, visit and start following Blog-a-Ton. The theme for the month is 'An Untold Story'



The irregular green lines on the monitor grew fierce, wires that extended to his chest, hid the tender heart battling for blood. He raised his left arm though the oxygen mask could not hide his smile.  His eyes expressed the desire to speak.
BUT
The last war ceased, and it was lost, An Untold Story.


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32 comments:

  1. Untold sorrow for his family.

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  2. The untold story..was never told.., may be that is why it why it was called untold. Your story was short but it just made me realize that..with a person's demise there is always an untold story!
    All the Best for BAT 32 :)

    Regards,
    Megha

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    1. yes, and i wanted this to remain very short, for then there's the incompleteness in it

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    1. Thanks Nivi :D After long time,you are on ma blog.:)

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  4. with such brevity your brought to maximum effect the spirit of the title

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  5. The sadness...of having a story and the desire to share it...but not being able to express it...aptly penned..ATB for BAT

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    1. YOu guessed it perfect Rinaya :)
      same to u :D

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  6. Haven't seen that good a 55 fiction before! Best wishes for BAT!

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    1. Thank you Deepa :) same to u .. wishes for BAT

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  7. Really a good concept you have incorporated. Nicely written :-)

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  8. This is ur first attempt for 55 fiction rite? well needless to say, u r a success..

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  9. Excellent one!!!!

    Do visit mine http://www.stylisharjun.blogspot.in/2012/10/an-untold-story.html

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  10. so much to say...but ran out of time to do so
    ATB for BAT :)

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    1. Thanks Karan. Indeed time doesnt always permit our wishes
      Same to you

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  11. good attempt to a 55er! good luck! :)

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    1. Thank you Apal :)
      good luck to you too

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  12. Brief and effective story!

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  13. That was excellent . With every death die many untold stories !

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  14. Perfectly brought out the sorrow in 55 words. Loved it!! ATB for BAT! Now following you :)

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  15. Short and full of impact. Very easy to relate to.

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  16. so much said in 55 words.. Loved it :)

    Someone is Special

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  17. hi friend eppadi irrukingo? best wishes

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  18. Thats why i believe to say what is in the heart always .. lest we run out of time to say them




    Bikram's

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