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Wednesday, May 3, 2017

The stranger

The stranger at the coffee house

As she finished the last sip of her coffee, her gaze accidentally met that of an young man seated on the table across her

He was indeed handsome. She couldn't help blush, occasionally sipping the imaginary coffee from the empty cup. Smitten by his smile, she returned another smile.

She wondered if she should approach him with a Hi. But all he did was Stranger smile, wasn't that too early?

Smitten by him, she didn't realize that her phone had been buzzing since a while , and as she checked the messages she saw him stand up. Her heart skipped a beat. He took the walking stick that rested on the chair next to him.. And walked past her carefully taking every step. The waiter assisted him get down the stairs!

She couldn't help but laugh. She owned it to the stranger. The blind stranger 

3 comments:

  1. I loved how you played with her attention to the stranger and her phone. One second she finds that her phone is buzzing, and the next second the stranger's smile towards her becomes more or less meaningless.

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  2. Very dramatic ending. I was expecting that phone call was from that stranger.

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  3. New follower..Never expected that suspense...

    Regards
    Shalet
    www.thedoveandtheraven.blogspot.com)
    (www.shaletrjimmy.blogspot.com)

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